Post by Billy the Kid is my hero on Jun 27, 2012 9:41:41 GMT -5
I was imprssed by devinb suggestion of making an script about the life of Brushy Bill Roberts alias Billy the Kid.
So I decided to make what the opening scene might look like.
No, I not going to make a full story of this, it is just a test.
Ch 1. In the instance before death, a man can relive a lifetime
A woman's voice whispered to him "Billy, come here son".
Billy's brain worked fast, what was his mother doing here? Wasn't he dead? He opened his eyes and saw the ceiling of his bedroom...
He sat up, he knew he was dying but when death was going to come, he did not know.
He clasped his hands together and prayed one last time for forgiveness from god. Then he got out of bed, putted on his clothes and walked to the doorway.
Lizzie was making breakfest for her husband when she heard the door open behind her, she turned around and saw her husband.
"I am feeling better Lizzie." he said before she ask any questions about his health, he lied, he knew he was dying but he did not want her to know.
She ingorned him and said she needed to mail a package the post-office, "I take it" Billy said almost instantly.
As he walked towards the doorway, he Lizzie said. "Good day Brushy" he knew what was happening to him so he sliently mumbled "Goodbye" as he walked out the door for the last time.
Then he walked down the front walkway, down Lena St. and left toward town
Back to the right
A stop at the post office to mail a letter for his wife.
Then he looked across the street to the drug store and saw his own younger self with a pistol by his side, knowing his purpose, he seemed to have a weight lifted off my chest. This burden of knowing that he was a cause in the death of some men, seemed lift off of him, knowing that I was going to pay my price. He wasn't scared, he was peaceful. He silently walked towards his younger self and stood. His younger self aimed the pistol at the heart of Billy the Kid and fires.
Billy felt the bullet rip into his flesh, passing into his heart.
He felt his legs crumble from beneath him. In slow motion his head hit the ground. He tried to wipe away the film that swam in front of his eyes. His younger self had vanished.
A laugh began to grow somewhere inside of his head, he grinned and smiled, he was happy. He may have not gotten his pardon but he had bought himself foward to talk so he still had forgivenness.
Billy's mother called to him " Come home now son, you never stood a chance" . He felt mother, pulling me with white wings, pulling him up to her. To where he belonged.
Author's Note: Question 1. I made Billy (Brushy) pray because sources say that he had earlier sought forgiveness from God and had become a Christian.
Question 2. The voice calling to Billy is that of his mother.
Question 3. Billy is happy becuase while he did not revice his pardon, he still came foward to tell people who he was so he still got hope and forgiveness.
Tell me what anybody thinks!
So I decided to make what the opening scene might look like.
No, I not going to make a full story of this, it is just a test.
Ch 1. In the instance before death, a man can relive a lifetime
A woman's voice whispered to him "Billy, come here son".
Billy's brain worked fast, what was his mother doing here? Wasn't he dead? He opened his eyes and saw the ceiling of his bedroom...
He sat up, he knew he was dying but when death was going to come, he did not know.
He clasped his hands together and prayed one last time for forgiveness from god. Then he got out of bed, putted on his clothes and walked to the doorway.
Lizzie was making breakfest for her husband when she heard the door open behind her, she turned around and saw her husband.
"I am feeling better Lizzie." he said before she ask any questions about his health, he lied, he knew he was dying but he did not want her to know.
She ingorned him and said she needed to mail a package the post-office, "I take it" Billy said almost instantly.
As he walked towards the doorway, he Lizzie said. "Good day Brushy" he knew what was happening to him so he sliently mumbled "Goodbye" as he walked out the door for the last time.
Then he walked down the front walkway, down Lena St. and left toward town
Back to the right
A stop at the post office to mail a letter for his wife.
Then he looked across the street to the drug store and saw his own younger self with a pistol by his side, knowing his purpose, he seemed to have a weight lifted off my chest. This burden of knowing that he was a cause in the death of some men, seemed lift off of him, knowing that I was going to pay my price. He wasn't scared, he was peaceful. He silently walked towards his younger self and stood. His younger self aimed the pistol at the heart of Billy the Kid and fires.
Billy felt the bullet rip into his flesh, passing into his heart.
He felt his legs crumble from beneath him. In slow motion his head hit the ground. He tried to wipe away the film that swam in front of his eyes. His younger self had vanished.
A laugh began to grow somewhere inside of his head, he grinned and smiled, he was happy. He may have not gotten his pardon but he had bought himself foward to talk so he still had forgivenness.
Billy's mother called to him " Come home now son, you never stood a chance" . He felt mother, pulling me with white wings, pulling him up to her. To where he belonged.
Author's Note: Question 1. I made Billy (Brushy) pray because sources say that he had earlier sought forgiveness from God and had become a Christian.
Question 2. The voice calling to Billy is that of his mother.
Question 3. Billy is happy becuase while he did not revice his pardon, he still came foward to tell people who he was so he still got hope and forgiveness.
Tell me what anybody thinks!
